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The tension here is unreal.
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Yara HiddenLV 4Newcomer
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The tension here is unreal.
Yara HiddenLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review5.0 out of 5
Characters feel real and the dialogue is sharp. I binged the whole thing in two nights. I love how the author handles the quiet moments between the big battles.
Yara HiddenLV 4Newcomer
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Did not see that coming.
Yara HiddenLV 4Newcomer
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Beautiful writing in this scene.
Yara HiddenLV 4Newcomer
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This chapter was amazing!
Yara HiddenLV 4Newcomer
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I need the next one now.
Yara HiddenLV 4Newcomer
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This chapter was amazing!
Yara HiddenLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review1.0 out of 5
I love how the author handles the quiet moments between the big battles. The world building pulled me in from the first chapter, and the pacing only gets better.