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Beautiful writing in this scene.
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Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
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Beautiful writing in this scene.
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review3.0 out of 5
I love how the author handles the quiet moments between the big battles. One of the best stories on the site right now. The magic system is original.
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
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Called it three chapters ago!
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review4.0 out of 5
Great premise. Some chapters drag, but the payoff is worth it. Great premise. Some chapters drag, but the payoff is worth it.
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review2.0 out of 5
The world building pulled me in from the first chapter, and the pacing only gets better. I love how the author handles the quiet moments between the big battles.
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
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This chapter was amazing!
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
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The tension here is unreal.
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
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Beautiful writing in this scene.
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review5.0 out of 5
One of the best stories on the site right now. The magic system is original. One of the best stories on the site right now. The magic system is original.
Pia WanderingLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review1.0 out of 5
Slow start, but once the main plot kicks in it is hard to put down. Slow start, but once the main plot kicks in it is hard to put down.