Nia BrokenLV 4

The world building pulled me in from the first chapter, and the pacing only gets better. One of the best stories on the site right now. The magic system is original.

Characters feel real and the dialogue is sharp. I binged the whole thing in two nights. One of the best stories on the site right now. The magic system is original.

Great premise. Some chapters drag, but the payoff is worth it. Slow start, but once the main plot kicks in it is hard to put down.

Slow start, but once the main plot kicks in it is hard to put down. Characters feel real and the dialogue is sharp. I binged the whole thing in two nights.

I love how the author handles the quiet moments between the big battles. One of the best stories on the site right now. The magic system is original.