Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
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The tension here is unreal.
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Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
Commented
The tension here is unreal.
Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review5.0 out of 5
The world building pulled me in from the first chapter, and the pacing only gets better. Slow start, but once the main plot kicks in it is hard to put down.
Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
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Thanks for the chapter!
Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review2.0 out of 5
Characters feel real and the dialogue is sharp. I binged the whole thing in two nights. One of the best stories on the site right now. The magic system is original.
Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
Commented
I need the next one now.
Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
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Poor Kade, he deserved better.
Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review3.0 out of 5
Great premise. Some chapters drag, but the payoff is worth it. The world building pulled me in from the first chapter, and the pacing only gets better.
Vik LastLV 4Newcomer
Posted a review5.0 out of 5
Characters feel real and the dialogue is sharp. I binged the whole thing in two nights. The world building pulled me in from the first chapter, and the pacing only gets better.